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Dedication Takes a Lifetime But Dreams Only Last For a Night

Jack? With or Against Me?

Alex POV: I woke up as usual to my dad screaming "Where the fuck is my breakfast you lazy piece of shit??" I rolled out of bed sighing, climped up the stair and made him some eggs and bacon. "Disgusting. And I mean you and this pathetic excuse for food." He launched the plate at the back of my head and I ducked just in time. "Clean that up." He said walking away calmly. I swept up the broken plate, threw on some skinnies and a hoodie and went to school. I sat outside at lunchtime becuase of the pleasant weather and the fact Rian had to talk to his Calculus teacher when I noticed Jack looking upset with that jerk Blake and another jock
surround me. "Hi there faggot." said Blake "What do you want?" I asked unsure of why Jack and Blake were together. "Oh nothing as he snatched my sandwich, threw it on the floor and stepped on it."Why'd he you do that?" I asked raged. Who does he think he is, to bully me? "Well it was fun. Go on Jack." he smiled slightly shoving Jack forward. "Dont forget my guarantee." Javk stumbled a bit, balanced himself and before I could protect myself punched me right on my dads bruises. "What the fuck Jack?!" I said as I tried to block the pain spreading through my face. Blake smiled enjoying the show and said" There you go Jack! Right on his other bruises! Now that I think about it, where did those other bruises come from?" "None of your business." I growled. Blake punched me with Jack ocasionally helping again till I fell on the pavement next to my crushed sandwich, and curled up into a little ball. As Jack came to punch me again I stared at him and something in his eyes changed. He turned around and punched Blake. "Run Alex!" he said helping me up and pushing me away. Blake was almost red from anger. I turned around and ran ,my entire body hurting thanks to Jack and Blake. I was truely baffled with Jacks behavior. He curses me, shuns my help, beats me up and then saves me? As I iced my new scars the bell rang,signaling the end of lunch. I couldn't stop thinking about Jack. What if he was sitting there bleeding? I turned around ditching English and returned to the courtyard. Blake fortunately wasnt there but neither was Jack. I was about to turn around annoyed I would be late when I noticed someone whisper my name weakly. Jack was curled up bleeding and as I came up to him he whispered "Dont leave me." and then he passed out. He was so thin and fragile. His thin frame was slightly shaking as I looked at his bruised and beaten face. I carried him to his car and opened it using the key in his pocket. I then opened the bandaged his cuts with some bandages I found and waited for him to wake up.

Jacks POV:

Notes

Hi! New chapter! Hope you all like it. Thanks to my awesome 6 subscribers. You made me so happy. And thanks to whoever commented(I'm on my iPod so I can't check the name) you totally made my day! Keep reading subscribing and commenting love you <3

Comments

Awwwwwwwwww this is amazing thank you

Fan girl Fan girl
11/3/14
@JagkBarakitten
Sorry for not commenting I forgot I had a account here -_-
oh cool.
Thanks!!!!!! Don't worry they're will be a sequel! Thanks!! Ii will <3
ironi1234 ironi1234
3/2/13
just for you know, i am "JuBarakitten" ok? i was doing my login with my tumblr but i changed my url i needed to do this new account, but anyway
NO
FUCK
YOU CANT JUST FINISH THIS
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK
KEEP WRITING I NEED IT
oh im so sad cause i really love your fanfic =C SHAME ON YOU!!!!
you're a good writer! if you do a new fanfic, please message me ok? i'll surely read it c:
JagkBarakitten JagkBarakitten
2/18/13
@JuBarakitten
Don't worry. I just got this really epic idea for a sequel and I just can't wait to write it! I just need to finish the last chapter for this :) you're comment about my comment about you making my day made my day too ;) lol yeah same here
ironi1234 ironi1234
2/16/13
@ironi1234
YAAAAAAAAY please dont stop writing! please U_U oh i love when the people say that something i said made their days cause it always make MY day.
yeah my english is not that bad but you'll probably see something wrong LOL whatever
JuBarakitten JuBarakitten
2/13/13