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Find a Place for Me Again

Sixteen

"I don't feel so good," Kenzie groaned as she held onto her stomach. Before I could say anything to help her, Kenzie ran for the bathroom. I ran after her and got to the bathroom just as Kenzie emptied her stomach into the toilet. I sat beside her and rubbed her back as I held her hair out of her face.

"Do you have any idea what might be making you sick," I asked her.

"No," Kenzie groaned before she threw up again.

"Do you need to go to the hospital," I asked her.

"No, I'll have Matt take me to the drugstore to get me something to help me feel better," Kenzie replied as she stood up and flushed the toilet before she rinsed out her mouth.

"Okay, are you going to be side stage to see me play," I asked her.

"Maybe," she teased.
"Kenzie you have to tell him. He has a right to know," I overheard Matt talking with Kenzie.

"I'm scared, Matt. What will he say," Kenzie replied.

"I don't know. But I know you have to tell him," Matt replied.

I came around the corner and I wrapped my arms around Kenzie. She fell into my embrace and smiled. I always have that effect on her. She and I fit well together.

"Alex, I have something I have to tell you," Kenzie started.

"And what would that be," I asked her.

"Remember when we baby sat my niece and you said that you'd want to settle down with me one day, like get married and have a couple kids," she replied.

"Yeah I remember, why," I asked her.

"It might happen out of order," she replied.

"Are you telling me that," I started.

"I'm pregnant Alex. We're going to have a baby," Kenzie turned in my embrace and she had tears falling down her cheeks.

"I'm going to be a dad," I smiled as I kissed her, "We're going to have a baby!"

"Alex, we're going to have a baby," Kenzie wrapped her arms around my neck as I held her to me tightly.

"I am so happy right now. We're going to be great parents I just know it," I beamed.

I got down on my knees and lifted up Kenzie's tank top to reveal her flat stomach. I rubbed it softly before I planted a dozen tender kisses on her flesh. Right now, in her womb, our baby was growing. I was so happy. I got my memory back and now I'm going to be a father. Nothing can go wrong for me.

Notes

This isn't the curveball, but it's coming soon.

Comments

So I just read what you have of this, and I'm sad to see it was never finished. :(
It's a bit rushed at some parts, but I really like the concept of it. It surprised me that you had him gain his memory back kind of quickly; I thought for sure the twist was going to be he was going to lose it again or something. I found it a bit odd how that was kind of the plot for the first half, and then this second part kind of diverted from it. But I really like what you have of it, it's really sweet. :)
If you ever choose to finish it, I will be here to read. Although I think a final chapter wrap-up would totally work for this, if you're struggling for inspiration. Just a final update to conclude it.
You're a great writer, and so, I just wanted to leave a comment letting you know that, and to show that people are still stumbling across this and reading it. :)

Nanook Nanook
7/11/16
My teacher had her baby born 15 weeks premature on my birthday. Please let the baby live.
KateTheGreat69 KateTheGreat69
8/13/13
Ahhh update its so good
I can tell. You've been very productive. You made a baby in a weekend. Another new chapter?! I feel so spoiled.
KateTheGreat69 KateTheGreat69
8/12/13