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More Specifically, Me Maxine

When the Gunshot Fires

Jack’s POV

I currently sit with my husband on the small couch in the front lounge just watching YouTube videos. We just finished watching a CTFxC vlog by Charles Trippy. He is such an amazing man to his wife Alli, I wonder if Martin will be like to Maxine. They are such a beautiful couple.

“Jacky do you think that Martin will propose to Maxine like Charles did?” The wonderful in my lap asks.

“If he does that would be amazing.” I say, giving him a kiss, then turning my head back to screen where a title of a video catches my eye.

“Cracker Barrel Fight” by a random user here on the interface.

I click on it and watch all of it, by the end of the video it shows Maxine getting taken away by a man, but Martin saves her.

“Ja-Jack, that wasn’t Maxine, tell me that wasn’t her! That was terrifying!”

“It was, but Martin saved her, plus she is perfectly okay. Martin called yesterday and right now they are on there way to North Dakota, Maxine has a friend up there.” I say, calming my husband down.

“Sky?”

“Yes, Sky.”

“I haven’t heard that name in years, I was friends with her mom in high school.”

“Our school was known for teen pregnancy’s wasn’t it?”

“Yup!” My husband pecks me on the lips.

“Love you.” I say.

“Love you too.”

Maxine’s POV

“Are we there yet?” I whine for the ten billionth time.

“Maxine am a speaking some foreign language?” Razor says.

“Drive faster.”

“I am not getting a ticket today.”

“How much longer?”

“Like five minutes. Cool your shit.”

“There’s no one in this stupid field. Go-” I say, getting cut off by Matt shoving cotton candy in my mouth.

“That should cool yeah.” He says.

“I hate you.”

“No you don’t.”

“Maxine shut the hell up, we’re here.” Razor says as we reach a log cabin.

We get out of the car and walk up the long driveway to meet my friend from years ago.

After ringing the doorbell a tall girl with black hair opens the door.

“Maxine?” She asks.

“It’s me!” I say, jumping up and down. “Do you remember our handshake?”

“Of course!” She says and we do our long awaited handshake. “So who are your friends?”

“Well this blue haired girl is Razor, we met in Freshman year, the pink haired one is Leda and her boyfriend is Matt, the one holding her hand.” I say, then pecking Martin on the lips. “And this is Martin Johnson, he’s sings in the band Boys Like Girls and is my boyfriend thanks to Razor I met him.” I say as we walk into the living room of the huge log cabin.

“You said on Facebook you were looking for someone, who?” She asks.

“You know my dad left years ago, well we’re looking for him.” I say.

“Well I wish you good luck on that. Hey do you guys want anything to to eat?” She wonders, acting really suspicious and just walking out of the room to the kitchen.

Razor whispers over to me and says “Max we need to get out of here, people like Sky don’t act like this normally. I know these things and she just doesn’t seem right.”

“Same, she was never like this before. I know people change but this is just insane.” I say as the doorbell rings.

Sky gets the door and I see a face I hate to see.

“Damon! I didn’t know you were coming! Come and meet my friends!” Sky says.

“Hey babe, I’d love to meet them.” The sick man says.

They come into the living room and Razor gives Damon a glare, Martin putting a safe arm around me and Matt brings Leda close to him.

“Damon these are my friends, Razor, Matt and his girlfriend Leda and Maxine and her boyfriend Martin.” Sky says, myself now knowing why she just isn’t the same. Damon corrupted her innocent mind. Her name to him isn’t even Sky I bet anymore.

“So how do you know Mel?” Damon asks us, knowing I we know Sky.

“Damon you fucker! You corrupted her little mind and you will pay!” Razor screams, putting her fist up.

“Whoa, I don’t even know you!” The monster says, acting innocent.

“Yeah you do Damon! My best friend is on medication because of you! You want proof because I can give it to you! There are videos on the internet exploding because of that fight two days ago! We ended up staying in Minnesota with my CIA cousin because we didn’t know what to do! You just don’t know when to stop!” Razor yells, explaining what happened over the past few days.

“Show me the proof.” He says.

“Bitch you got it!” Razor says, pulling out her cell phone and getting the video.

It plays and Sky just looks in shock, not knowing what to do but to cling onto the monster.

“Sky, Damon is nothing but a player. You can have fun with him but we need to get going. I can’t be friends with you if you stay with him, he was a monster to me and every girl he’s been with. I just don’t care.” I say, walking out the door not caring.

“Maxine wait!” She calls.

“I can’t! Damon hurt me and no one cared about it till now! I was with him for two years and they were the worst years of my life. I’m going to have some fun with my best friends and boyfriend to find my dad and I want nothing to do with you!” I scream when I hear the gunshot, and that's when everything goes silent.

Notes

Okay Damon is back and Sky is dating him!? And a gunshot? What is going on? Who might die? You will just have to wait and see till the next chapter.
Till darkness completes us,
Sarah's Butterflies

Comments

@dizzy-hurricane

Thanks so much! Stay tuned in for the sequel that should be up by next week!
This was so good! I don't usually read fics like this either but it was still really great !
dizzy-hurricane dizzy-hurricane
10/12/13
@Sarah's Butterflies
I know how you feel!
Peace_Love_Jalex Peace_Love_Jalex
10/12/13
@Nothing-Personal

Plus I was bored and felt the need to get the story finished, I just don't have the time to write all these updates for the amount of stories I'm producing at the moment
@Sarah's Butterflies
smart idea that is
Peace_Love_Jalex Peace_Love_Jalex
10/12/13