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Aw, cute update. <3 Sorry it took me a minute to comment.
Excited to see more. :)

Catching up!
Aw, that was sweet how Abby's mom found her perfect dress. :) And aw, yay, Alex is back! :D And they're allowed to get... reacquainted now, haha. XD Abby must have curves now too from the baby, with all the attention; glad that Alex is protective of her, though. <3
This is really random, but I love when she calls Scarlett a ham like that little moment in chapter 35. XD So cute.
Great job with the updates! Can't wait for more! :)

Yay, another update! And OMG, I'm commenting within like, a day instead of a few weeks. XD A record for my commenting lately.
Great job with the chapter! Aw, Abby's mom is sick. :/ Hope she gets better for them to be able to go dress shopping. And haha, Abby and Alex making plans. ;) That's all I'm gonna say on that. XD
Short but sweet update. :) Note at the beginning that Scarlett's name is cut off for some reason, and it starts "carlett" lol.
Can't wait for more! :D

OMG, a dramatic update. :O Loved it, though!
I'm glad Abby and Scarlett are okay. Her dad is literally insane. Man... I'm glad you finally put that a bit to rest, though. I mean, she still has to deal with the legal stuff, but I feel like this is a step to resolving it. I was just wondering when he would turn up again.
And her conversation afterwards with Alex was very sweet. <3
One thing I want to note:
What seemed a lifetime later but was actually less than ten, I heard the police outside.
... this line was a bit off, because you just said "less than ten." Less than ten, minutes? I'm assuming that's what it was. XD But as is, it's sounding like you're saying less than ten lifetimes, lol. But that's just a small thing; the minutes thing is probably easily assumed.
Excited to see more! :)

Aw, Abby's on her own now with the baby; I hope this doesn't take too much of a toll on her mentally. :(
I'm loving these flashback scenes, especially the one in this latest update, that gives us insight to their relationship as it was starting, that we haven't seen before. It would be interesting to see more of those moments. You've done them before, but something just struck me about this one. Perhaps because it was about their first date. :')
It's funny, I got on here to read chapter 31, when I got sent the update for 32. :P So, two updates! Woot! :D
Great job with both updates; excited to read more! :)

Yay, an update! Great job with the chapter! :)
Their little family is so cute. <3 Love how they were when they went out and about... except towards the end there when Abby started getting jealous and it just kind of got sad from there. :( But I love how Alex was still there for her though.
Writer's block happens, no worries. Take your time if you need to. An idea I had, since the jealousy with her was brought up... maybe have Alex get jealous in some way? I was just thinking how it would be a huge dose of karma, because he says if they just look it doesn't bother him, but c'mon... really now? XD I don't really believe that for some reason, especially given how protective he is over Abby and her well-being. <3
So it would just be kind of funny for that to happen and then have Abby rub it in his face that she was right/justified in her own jealousy. XD Just sayin'.
But yeah, if you need help brainstorming more ideas, let me know and I'll try to come up with some. That's just one that came in mind for this chapter.... oh, and the thing with Abby's dad. I feel like that hasn't been fully resolved yet, right? Hopefully I'm not off with that. XD But yeah, that may be something to delve into again as well if you weren't already planning it.
Excited to see more! :)

Loved the updates! Great job! :D
Haha, that's totally true about Alex having a regal name. XD That's cute how they did that with the baby too. :)
And they seem to be adjusting fairly well, considering the fact that they're new parents. That's not easy. Alex is being so sweet and understanding and it's just so cute. :')
Hmm... wonder how Abby will adjust though when Alex goes back on tour? :/ She seems as okay as she can be now while he's there, but that'll be another adjustment when he leaves. Hopefully she'll be able to stay strong and hold down the fort. <3
Can't wait for more! :)

OMG hi. :D Haha. You're always so quiet when it comes to responses. XD
But oh, gotcha, maybe it's just because when they're posted within a certain time span, I only get the one notification.

@Nanook
There have been a few times, not sure how many exactly, that I have posted two chapters in a day. I do that when I go more than four days between chapters. I also have to say, I appreciate your feedback!

OMG. Cute, cute, cute! :D
I'm happy everything turned out okay, considering her early delivery.
I love how Alex sang A Dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes. That's a really sweet song. :')
I'm excited to see their new adventures with Scarlett. :)
I've been meaning to ask... every time you update lately, have you been posting two updates back to back? It's weird, because I'm only getting one notification, and the past couple of times I've noticed it's been more than one chapter. Although maybe it's something with the subscriptions system, idk.

Aw, yay, her mom will be living close to her. That's good, especially if she needs help, which she most likely will since it's her first time as a mom.
And Alex is back! :D So sweet moments with him cuddling with her, aw. And then him showing his concerned side again as well.
Great job with the updates! Can't wait for more! :)

Oh wow...
Her dad has some issues. Like, what was his goal? I thought he wanted to try to talk to her, not hurt her. :O She should honestly place charges, but at least she's doing a restraining order. That's better than nothing I suppose.
Then this latest update... I'm glad she's choosing to take it easy. But c'mon, Abby is a badass, she could've made it through until she absolutely had to take off. While I understand Alex's concern, it's like he had little faith in her. :/ Single mothers do this type of thing all the time, though. And just normal working mothers in general.
Bummer that he had to be away for his birthday too. :( Hope they're reunited again soon. <3

Aww, Luca Mason. <33
OMG, I'm so glad that Abby is okay! WTF. Who was following her? :O Was it random or someone she knows? Loved how caring Alex was, though. So sweet. :')
Sorry for the quick feedback; on a bit of a schedule today. But know that I enjoyed both updates, and great job with writing both! Excited to read more!

Aw, yay, they're all moved in to their new place! <3
Scarlett Aurora... it does sound regal/royal. :) Haha, great choice. Is it really a surprise they're having a girl? Abby has to be some sort of psychic though. :P
Something I'm wondering about, and I'm not sure if maybe I'm just spacing on it... I feel like we haven't seen a lot of Alex's parents in this. Maybe during the wedding a bit towards the end of the first installment? It would be interesting to see Abby and Alex visit them, though, since they visited Abby's mom. Or maybe bring them in a bit more in some other way, just for that balance for both sides of the family. Just something I thought about as I was reading the latest updates... idk why. I guess mainly with the family aspect coming in with everyone.
Excited for more! :D

<3 Cute updates! :)
Aw, Alex has left again. :( Always sad when he has to leave. He also missed out on her birthday. :( And Jack had to miss Miranda's baby shower. Aw. :/ :(
Excited to find out what Abby's having, though. It's awesome how confident she is that it's gonna be a girl. And then Alex with it being a boy. XD So it'll be interesting to finally find out who's right. A healthy baby is the important thing, though.
I still love how caring Alex is for Abby, and how concerned he gets. <33 So sweet.
Great job, and can't wait for more! :)

Great job with the updates! :D
Aww, yay, he's back and he can enjoy these precious moments with her. :')
It was so cute the way their parents reacted. :) And aw, Abby's starting to get more emotional. I wonder if it'll get too much for Alex? He seemed to start to get annoyed with it in this latest update. What will happen as the pregnancy continues on? :O
I love how caring he is, though, and how he's very protective of her and the baby. :') It's just so cute.
Interested in seeing what you have in store next!

Great job with the update! :) It was sweet, as always.
I'm surprised I'm not getting more update notifications for this story, lol, I feel like with the first installment, I got one every other day. But perhaps life is just hectic right now, it happens. I just hope you're not struggling with writers block. :( And like, no rush to put anything out or do that again, it just surprises me that's all.
Excited to read more! Don't have much to say since not too much went down in this chapter... poor Abby for having to deal with the shitty symptoms though. :/

Ooof, it's been a minute since I've commented.
I can't quite remember what update that last comment was left after, so, I'll just try to leave feedback on what I haven't talked about yet.
OMG, she's gonna have a baby! Aww. :D It's a bummer that Alex is missing the beginning of it though. Makes me sad for them. :( But you can tell they're both definitely excited, and Alex's reactions are definitely the cutest. <3
Interested in hearing about what she's having. And hope Alex returns to her soon. :(
Hmm... what else. It was nice how she went out of town with her friends, had a little time off... if she's getting exhausted with work now though, it'll be interesting to see how that continues. Like, will she be able to handle it?
Feel like the drama isn't over with her dad yet. :/ Interested in seeing if anything more happens with that.
But yeah, still love this story! Hope to see more soon! :D

Well...
I got no sort of notification for this. Although I guess it's not like Mibba where it informs you of sequels? I'm not even sure if they can be connected on here... but I was wondering if you had started posting for it, so I checked out the home page and saw it. XD :P
So, yeah, I'm here! Love what you have of it so far. It's cute how they're trying to start a family now. :)
Abby's dad is surely a weirdo though. :/ Wonder what his true intentions are. A little weird that he's trying to be in her life now.
But yeah, Abby and Alex are just as cute as ever. Interested in seeing what all you have in store for this. <3