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Aw! A happy ending!
i love the way you were able to incorporate bits and pieces from their last encounters. And good on Emma for having her own plan and sticking to it!
@Newyork_xo
That's exactly what I was going for! You get me xD
Hmm... I wouldn't say that. I would however agree that she always subconsciously knew she didn't see a future with him. Like she said, she didn't know if she'd marry him if they were just in New York and nothing else was going on. He just wasn't the one.
Oh, it's super spontaneous. Very stupid, but spontaneous. I can try to work in the idea, but I'm pretty sure they both wouldn't be that stupid xD I feel like they would already scare each other off if they said they loved each other. This isn't a Disney princess movie!!!!
If this was a TV show I feel like you would have heard a BUM BUM BUM... after Jack pointed out they were both single at the same time, lol.
and course she’s not as upset as she thought she’d be. She didn’t love him!!!
and what’s more spontaneous than accepting a marriage proposal to a guy you barely know after not accepting one from your boyfriend??? They can be in Vegas and do it in a chapel and Elvis performs the ceremony! Sorry... I’m tired so my exhaustion is manifesting itself in a weird hyper here lol
@Daydreamers
Well, it didn't exactly mean it wasn't a bad one, it just meant that Emma wasn't as upset as she thought she should be.
Haha in response to your last comment, thankfully you caught it before spoiling the whole thing, lol.
I cant wait to see what happens at the show!
@Newyork_xo
I had this whole comment written out... and then I realized I literally would have spoiled the entire last chapter I have right now. Like the ENTIRE. And I would ruin the one that's supposed to come after this, and the one after that one. They're all connected.
The main gist was 'I don't think Alex would do that and Emma wouldn't say yes'. They're very spontaneous, but they're not stupid xD
Slightly unrelated, have you ever heard of the YouTube channel YesTheory? Cause their channel totally inspired the entire story... and I literally realized that everything I knew about trips to Iceland came from one of their videos. I already wondered why I was so attracted to such a random place xD Beach vacations are overrated, I wanted something cool.
I will, however, try to add that spontaneity to the final chapter... I'm just unsure how just yet.
Okay okay okay... I know that them getting engaged/married in the end is lame and kind of cheesy BUT! wouldn’t it also be kind of fitting for them? Like they spent all of 19 minutes together before thinking it was okay to go on vacation together. It would be a fitting spontaneous action...
I’m sure whatever you go with will be fine though lol
@Newyork_xo
It all has to come full circle, I like it when authors do that.
And this was the first time Emma had a proper plan involving Alex! It shows that just chance encounters won't cause them to get together.
7/3/18