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Love Yourself so No One has to - Comments
I like the way you write but I'd wish you would have put more into the prologue to show what makes this story special. Up to now it sounds like (ATL)boy cheated on girl then realises his mistake and tries to get her back. I'd love to read that too but rather have a sneak peek of the unusual in your story.
@T-what
I appreciate you taking the time to give me some feedback, yeah I see what you mean, when I posted it I felt like something was missing and without the rest of my story this doesn't really have a great deal of context to it. I'll try and do better for the rest of the story. Thank you for the comment :)
5/4/17