Order's Up! - Comments

love itttt

@T-what

psh, right? #rude

@Alltimegabi

omg awe <3 i'm really glad you're liking it so far; it means a lot to me.

Wow, Jack is being a massive jerk there, wonder what came over him?

I'm usually a ghost reader, but I wanted to tell you guys that I'm really loving this story so far! Looking forward to the next update!! :)

@krysward.tentacles
Excuse me ma'am, I'm not the one who always kills off my characters, I only broke the hearts of our readers once ;(

@ApathyforSympathy

Oh my God that's exactly what was in my head, and I was literally watching it while writing the first chapter!
I'm glad you liked them. I was iffy since I'm starting to write again!

PS: tell that to Mrs. Breanna lol always heartbreaking

The first thing on my mind when I read they were a family owning a burger place was Bob's Burgers... Oh well. Anyways, I liked the first chapters and I can't wait to read more ^.^
P.s. please don't break my heart like the last time