Fire in the sky. - Comments

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I found it confusing while writing it but I seriously didn't know what to put as I feel like I'm neglecting this story a bit so 9 just wrote whatever came to my head... hopefully my brain isn't to tried when I finish work and hopefully the next chapter might explain a bit better or I might just rewrite that whole chapter.. depends on how tired I am but hopefully it'll be explained...

I like the chapter but the fighting scene is really confusing, I don't really get what's happening and who is doing what. Then again maybe that's not really important. :)

Uhm, do we find out why Jack did dump Alex in front of his pack like that? I'm confused. Everything seemed fine the night before, what happened?

I love this! It's so interesting and I love that Alex is a vampire while Jack is a wolf