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@Northern Downpour
Yeah... but looking at the context it should be easy to figure out which is which. And I really hope ex-girlfriend Holly will not show up anymore. That will make it even less confusing.
@aweirdkindofyellow
Hahahaha, I know, I didn't really think it through when I named her cousin Holly :')
The Holly cousin and Holly ex-girlfriend thing just confused me so much. I was literally staring at the sentence about Holly telling Amy's mom about Jack, for ages. It took my a while to figure out you meant Holly as in Amy's cousin. I feel so stupid now!
YOU FIGURED OUT HOW TO WRITE THE CHAPTER
Take your tablets and stop staying up so late
3/22/16