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@T-what
Thank you! I'm thankful for all your beautiful comments <3 there are more stories to come for sure :)
Awww, I get emotional too! Thank you so much for this beautiful story, I enjoyed every chapter of it. Looking forward to more stories. xx
@ApathyforSympathy
Ah, thank you!! Yeah I haven't had much time, but now I do so I'll focus on the writing more.
Seeing how you like my story, it's like the best feeling ever❤
OH MY GOD! I was just asking myself where are all the authors because I haven't read a fanfic in a week and BAM there you are, now I can go to sleep with my soul at peace.
Awesome chapter btw, I can't wait to see how Alex's character develops in the future :D
@T-what
Thank you! I'm trying to improve, be more detailed, hope it's alright :)
A boy Alex used to be with was mentioned, but not by name. So you don't have to re read :)
Awww, they are so cute together, I swear! I can't remember what the deal with Josh was, has he popped up in the story before? have to go back and re read it, I guess.
@xxinvisibletearsxx
Thank you for the love! Oh, it's sorta spontaneous, like he legit says it, spells it out :D I know it's something you're probably not used to xD I don't usually use it.
Loved this chapter! This story just keeps getting cuter, I swear. One thing has been bugging me though, and that's your use of text speech when the characters are talking to each other. It's not a lot, but you've used "lol" a few times now. This chapter it was in the sentence "'No problem, I know the band so I kinda used them, lol." (When Vic and Jack found each other)
@ApathyforSympathy
Awh thank you so much! Yeah, it's been like a year, I know I'm terrible :D But I just couldn't leave it like this :D Glad you're on board <3
Oh boy, I didn't think this story would make a come back, but I'm happy you decided to finish it :D
I reread all the chapters to make sure I didn't forget anything and now I'm ready to go :D
@xxinvisibletearsxx
Oh my god, this was really unexpected! Thank you for all the compliments, I really really appreciate them, the critique aswell. I will definitely work on that more, this is my 3rd ff and I neglect writing in general, because I lack time, but I will definitely put all the work in it. Thank you very much, you really made my day! :) Thank you for your subscrtiption! <3
I just got done reading all of the chapters that are currently published, and frankly, I'd like to applaud you. This is actually one of the best stories I've read on this website. While the plotline itself is a little bit cliché, you make up for it with a decent skill in writing, character development, and just overall realism. The characters are realistic and actually human in nature (rather than being portrayed as a perfect angel, as some writers do), and you don't waste any time with long, boring, unnecessary descriptions of unimportant things or events. However, that does bring me to my next point. While it is good that you don't bother with unintelligible gibberish, I don't think it would kill you to maybe incoorporate a bit more descriptive writing. Describe feelings, scents, visions, things of the sorts in a more broader spectrum with increased vocabulary. I feel like it would really add something to your chapters and to the characters themselves!
I look forward to more of this story, though! Definitely subscribed!
@we_party_today
Thank you :* Yeah, I know, I was thinking about that, but I'll write some more anyways. I just feel like I'm bad at it xD
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@carolinesenpai
Awh, yeah I had a hard time writing that :D Sorry I'm replying this late, but I've been posting everything on wattpad so I haven't checked this for a while.
10/11/17