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This is an amazing story so glad I found it can't wait to see what happens and who she ends up with :D
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This is an amazing story so glad I found it can't wait to see what happens and who she ends up with :D
Hmm... so just finished this, lol. I am a fast reader I guess, I only just started it. :O I read the first installment but I'll just leave my overall feedback here.
Ugh, the struggle though. I mean, I'm happy that Easy figured herself out and realized who she wanted to be with... I'm just very biased with ATL though, lol. So I was kind of sad with how this one ended too, idk.
This one also made me sad with how much I felt like the band members took advantage of her. Again, in the end she was finally happy, but it was just sad how horribly AA treated her and then she went and helped the one member anyway, even though I personally just would have left him... like c'mon, she could've been paralyzed for real this time and she still gave that douche another chance. I just... it kind of saddened me how she did that. He seemed grateful, but still. Sigh...
But, again, I will look at this from a broader perspective: writing wise it was awesome, you did a great job with it. And there was kind of a live and learn lesson with it, so kudos to that.
The only thing I was left questioning was that, okay, so was her and Alex separating their official goodbye to each other? Because it just didn't seem like it to me, and that seemed like it was never totally resolved, just like, a final phone call or something with him probably would have been a bit more clarifying on that front. But in regards to her other relationship possibilities, at least they were closed off, or opened up in Alan's case. But that's the only question I was really left with, I think. Maybe I just didn't read that part the way I was supposed to, lol.
But, great job. Onto your new one. :D (Which, upon looking briefly, probably shouldn't take me long to comment on since it's still getting started. So expect another comment in a few moments, lol.)
1/8/17