The First Time - Comments

Ooooooooo I'm liking it already. And I'm only on like the 4th chapter

@Maddiekilljoy
I am glad you are enjoying it. I will be updating tomorrow, so please stay with me. Thanks for reading it.. :)

Ugh! I need them to see each other this is getting so good!

funny enough, one of the cards in the Heads Up game before said Bostonian :-D

@ThatGirlYouDontKnow
Thank you so much. That means a lot. :)

*hugs* :D I love love love this btw.

@ThatGirlYouDontKnow
Okay, but I am not at home right now, so I will do it as soon as get home. Thank you for reading by the way. :) *hugs*

omffggggg. I need the next chapter now. that is such a cliff hanger

@BreakingJessie_x
:), I know it's not the best fanfic, but I'm glad you took the time to read it. :)

@ThatGirlYouDontKnow
Oh, that's nice to read. I appreciate that you like it. I hope you'll like the upcoming chapters. :)

@pocketfulofsunshine
I like the story line of it, and it's so easy to relate to. So, I'll find myself in class and just daydream, and next thing I know, Im thinking about emma and zack. lol

@pocketfulofsunshine
What are you sorry for? I'm flattered that you asked me to read it!

@ThatGirlYouDontKnow
first of all, thank you for reading it and I hope I can make the next chapters better. Sorry for bad grammar or spelling. Second, what made you think of my fanfic all day? And third, I hate school. I just want to lock myself in my room and write all day.

@pocketfulofsunshine
So far so good(: I've been thinking about your fanfiction all day. xD
I cant update mine until at least friday too. It sucks. I can't wait to get out of school

@BreakingJessie_x
Thank you very much for taking your time and reading it. I know the request was very bitchy and annoying. I am sorry about that. Also, I will take your wonderful tip and try to develop my writng. Again, I am sorry. Have a great week.

Not too bad for your first fic. It's really just about your style and how you grow as an author as time goes by. Don't look to other people to influence you. Your personal style is going to be what draws readers in. You're doing a great job. Keep it up!

@ThatGirlYouDontKnow
Thank you very much. :D
I hope you like what's going to come..

amazing :D

@Maddiekilljoy
Thank you very much. I will try my very best to keep this story going well. I hope you like what's going to come.

:)

I really like the way this is heading so far. It's different for the other stories. I love it. Keep up the good work.