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Imprint - Comments

I really like this concept you have going for this story. :) I'm not sure if you get on to read comments anymore; I feel like I comment on so many of your stories but never hear anything. lol. Maybe I'm just annoying.
But anyway, I wanted to leave a comment letting you know that I like what you have of this. If you ever choose to continue, I will be here to read.

Nanook Nanook
9/1/16

Omg this is bloody amazing I love it when stories have that turn that you weren't expecting

Imlostinstereo Imlostinstereo
5/26/15

I love it! This is such an amazing story!

FallenTorment FallenTorment
2/13/14

@ToxicxDancefloor
You're too sweet doll! I've been writing since I was 13, so I know how important it is to get postive feedback as well as constructive criticism. Any questions you have, or maybe if you want me to read anything before you publish it, please feel free to message me! :D

@Miss Sarah Louise
You have no idea how long I've wanted a comment like yours. I'll go back and add that in. You are my favorite comment-er ever. ♥♥

This is a really great concept, thought its definitely weird picturing Alex as a wolf, lol.
My one note would be to go back and add details; describe the sensation of becoming a wolf, describe their surroundings, how their senses are affected differently as a wolf than as a human. Think of this story like a movie in your head. Picture everything and then describe it as you see it in your mind. It will help bring this concept to life even more than you already have.