Take a Breath, Say Goodbye - Comments

This fic is cool, update please :D

OMFG
ZOMBIES WHAAAAAT
ZACK IS A ZOMBIE? I WANT TO DIE, HE DIDNT DESERVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!
but ignoring the pain of knowing zack is a freaking zombie, i loved the context haha i would freak out and cry like a little baby or try to escape but then a zombie would probably bite me and i die
they will run away???? for where??????

@SaraBethGaskarth
Legit!

well that escalated quickly O_O

@alxgskrth
WHAAAAAAAAAT
WHO THE FUCK IS THIS SHITTY PERSON? TELL ME
OR UPDATE TODAY
I NEED TO KNOW

@JagkBarakitten I could never let Alex do that when him and Jack haven't kissed yet! The person in the yard is scarier than you can ever imagine...

thanks god alex didnt kill himself... jack needs to help him <3 alex will find out that he need a new love and its jack <3 oooown
am i the only one that is scared about this person in the yard? wtf dude
please update

@JagkBarakitten I'll see if I can squeeze a dead Nicki Minaj into the next update ;)

zack we miss you *cries*
*hit my head on the wall*
*fall down stairs*
*dies*
oh so this little shit that killed our precious zack is a freaking demon disease????? fuck...
but you can say that this thing killed blood on the dance floor, at least it could be good for something! or nicki minaj, you can choose

@JagkBarakitten I KNOW IM SO SORRY BUT ZACK WAS A NECESSARY SACRIFICE :( I laughed at myself putting the Frodo part in hahahha (not the death... the name haha) gay sex will happen I promise, but not yet!

haha you put the Frodo in the story <3 ily
omg
OMFG YOU KILLED ZACK ???????????????????????????????
HOW COULD YOU????????????
actually i dont care if you killed lisa (i like her i real life of course, but she was on the jalex way and thats not right) but im kinda sad about the baby Frodo, he/she was inocent... anyway
jack you need to make alex happy
give him gay sex

@MeowKittehMew I know it was sudden! Don't worry I do explain what happened properly in the next few chapters :)

Wait, so everyone just died? ._. Woah...

Okay cool x3

@SaraBethGaskarth
I feel like I really rushed the fact that they died! So I'm gonna do like a side chapter where Jack remembers all of the things he and Zack have done together I think

This is so sad ;-;

@JagkBarakitten Frodo is a fantastic name! And I know, Rian's story in this is so horrible it hurts my feelings and I wrote it! :(

@SaraBethGaskarth It's breaking my heart a little writing it! Hopefully Jack won't do something stupid...

i think the kid should be Frodo, a little boy
but if its a girl, no problem cause Frodo still pretty good
FUCK LISA, WHY YOU DOING THIS???? now, alex cant dump her to stay with jack in the future
shiiiiiit~
omfg poor rian...
please update c:

They're having a baby?!?!
I can only imagine how Jack must really feel about that...