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@Sirensandmice
I've started a sequel. [: It's calle Can't Stop Won't Stop.. there are already two chapters <3
I've started a sequel. [: It's calle Can't Stop Won't Stop.. there are already two chapters <3
Omg SEQUEL please! IT is so good and you can't just leave us hanging like that this! SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL
Great story!
I wouldn't want you to change anything about it, it's perfect the way it is.
So, I think you should definitely write a sequel :)
I wouldn't want you to change anything about it, it's perfect the way it is.
So, I think you should definitely write a sequel :)
IT'S AMAZING BUT THERE NEEDS TO BE A SEQUEL O K
THE ONLY THING YOU SHOULD DO DIFFERENTLY IS MAKE THEM STAY TOGETHER D:
(ok i'm done sorry but seriously this was so good :) )
THE ONLY THING YOU SHOULD DO DIFFERENTLY IS MAKE THEM STAY TOGETHER D:
(ok i'm done sorry but seriously this was so good :) )
this story is honestly adorable & all i want to do i keep reading haha. this chapter is cute though! i hope he can stay with jack! :D
@nicolebarakat621
oh did I ? I don't remember it .. haha , I guess i'll have to fix that . Thank you . <3
oh did I ? I don't remember it .. haha , I guess i'll have to fix that . Thank you . <3
just one thing. You mentions in like the second or third chapter that Alex's brother died that is why he moved. & then you said it again here & sai that Jack never heard that from him before. but other than that the story is great.
I love this story<3
7/3/13