Neverland - Comments

Uhm.........sorry you find Patriots fans irritating. Even though I am, I'm quite excited for the Super Bowl because it's going to be a good football game, and a great way for Ray Lewis to end his career.
Anyway, love this chapter and this story! It's great :)

Poor Ana. :(

Love this.

Good luck! And I love the new update :)

So good!

i love this story :D

Yay. Love this. I like thAt things are getting more intense with the introduction of Jake. I'm assuming I know what happened... And that's sad. Update soon!

@Brand New Fashion
my goodness get your head out of the gutter!
and you may or may not find out what really happened with Jake, I don't even remember if I actually wrote what happened or just bits of it...
but if I didn't write it out I may write a prequel to explain what happened to her.

Aw, what happened with Jake? :( Update again soon, lovely! I need to know what happened! And then hopefully Alex can make her feel a bit better.....

hahahaha <3

Awh yay, I loved the update!! I was so happy when I saw it in my alerts! :D

Welcome back. :-) love this still.

Oh my gosh I'm in love with this story :) I know you're busy, but I wish you'd update more often!

I love this. Props to Ana for resisting Alex's charm. I feel it's not an easy thing to do. More soon!!

Omg this is sooo good! Can't wait till the next chapter! :)

Good content, poor grammar. The story does, in some way, make up for the careless use of commas. However, good content does not overrule when there are three commas and a semi colon in one sentence! If you have two commas in one sentence, read it and see if it makes sense. Some sentences purely don't make sense and that's gonna hold the story back.

cant wait for more! :)